That's how (in my mind's eye) I see Tony actually going from, "Oh, it's Steve," to "Oh, it's Steve" in the blink of an eye, and how attraction blooms and sticks with one person, the other person not knowing.
That's exactly what I was going for. :-D They're so familiar with each other that that moment--when one or the other of them realizes they could be attracted to the other--is kind of special in my brain.
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That's how (in my mind's eye) I see Tony actually going from, "Oh, it's Steve," to "Oh, it's Steve" in the blink of an eye, and how attraction blooms and sticks with one person, the other person not knowing.
That's exactly what I was going for. :-D They're so familiar with each other that that moment--when one or the other of them realizes they could be attracted to the other--is kind of special in my brain.
Thanks for the feedback!