ext_12171 ([identity profile] alesca-munroe.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2008-10-11 03:16 pm (UTC)

"Of course, the Greeks being the brilliant and advanced civilization that they were, those statues generally wore considerably less clothing than Steve." XD Nice. The part about Steve's being capable of doing a 'cheerful bastard smirk' was great. And the part with the microwave oven. Okay, maybe the entire chapter was awesome and win.

Very nicely done, good character interaction.

Think you forgot to close an italics parenthesis back there, though.

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